12 наводящих вопросов.

1.Есть ли в работе введение?
2.Повторяет ли он вопрос (в утвердительной форме)?
3.Содержит ли введение тезисное утверждение (контрольную идею)?
4.Есть ли в каждом абзаце главное предложение (заявляющее тему)?
5.Поддерживают ли главные предложения «развивающих» абзацев тезисное утверждение?
6.Соответствует ли содержание этих абзацев их главным предложениям?
7.Ясны ли детали (примеры, факты, описания)?
8.Есть ли заключение?
9.Содержится ли в заключении ваше мнение, предпочтения, предвидение развития проблемы, решение, или причины?
10.Оканчивается ли эссе финальным высказыванием?
11.Отвечает ли эссе на все части вопроса?
12.Нет ли ошибок в грамматике, орфографии, пунктуации или словоупотреблении?

Эссе 1

Вопрос: Both large cars and small cars have their advantages and disadvantages. Write about some of these advantages and disadvantages. State which car you prefer and why.

Эссе: Both large and small cars have their advantages and disadvantages.
First, large cars have many advantages. For example, many people can be carried inside the car. Also, large cars are stronger in bad accidents, and they are very good for big families. About the disadvantages. Large cars cannot get through small streets, and they use a lot of gas to start and run.

Second, small cars also have advantages and disadvantages About the advantages. You can drive the small car any place. Small car uses less gas and many people call them economical. The last advantage is that the small car is good for the small family like a father, mother, and one child. About the disadvantages of small cars. The small car is not strong if someone has a bad accident. Moreover, small cars cannot go very fast because of their size.
For all this I like small cars.

Эссе 2

Вопрос: In your opinion, what is one of the major problems in the world today? Discuss some reasons for its existence Give some possible solutions.

Эссе: Every day on the radio, on TV, and in the newspapers, we hear, see, or read about many problems in the world. Because of this we must think about these problems. We must also try to find a solution for them. Our lives depend on this. For example, there are pollution problems.

Air pollution is the first kind. It mostly comes from fumes released from cars, airplanes, and trains. Also, factories dump waste anywhere, even in the city where many people are living. Public safety does not concern the factory owners, who must know that people don't want to live in pollution that is dangerous for their health. Nobody in this world wants to breath dirty air.

The second pollution problem is sea pollution. Many people earn their living from fishing in the sea. and the fish they catch feed many people. Their lives depend on the fish. But the sea has become so polluted from oil spills and factory wastes that the fish are dying. This pollution is not only killing the fish, but is also affecting those people who depend on the sea for food.

Seldom do you find a place nowadays that is not polluted. This problem is growing more difficult even day. We must find a good solution that makes the world a better place to live. A good way to keep these dangerous fumes away from the people must be found. Also, programs about pollution should be shown on TV. When people understand the bad effect of pollution on the human body maybe they will stop doing those things that make the air or the sea polluted. Also, we should plant trees, which are very useful for the land. In conclusion, I hope we can find a solution for even kind of pollution in the world.

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